By Chen Jun Class I Senior II
In order to celebrate the Double Ninth Festival, an activity to visit the Nursing Home was organized by the school Student Union on October 17th.
It was a good day. The students gathered at the school gate and set off at 8:00 a.m. On arriving there, some of the students started to clean the yard, some began to give a performance. Those who didn’t have a show were busy making dumplings with the old. Everybody was singing, dancing and chatting, with smiles on their faces. In the end, the students went back to school at 5:00p.m.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it arouse our interest in Chinese traditional culture, but also was very meaningful. What a wonderful day.
This is a good composition by a senior 2 student for he has a good foundation of English. Writing this composition, he can use some very useful sentences and high-level and fluent expressions such as “arouse one’s interest in…”. Given more time and practice, he is supposed to get better grades. (指导老师：周志坤)