六（3）班 杨尚霖 指导老师：吴迎
Hello everyone ! Do you know me ? I am your good friend ---- a sea turtle named Shining. I come from South Pacific . That’s great pleasure to meet you here today.
I’d like to share our turtles’ story for you next . A mother turtle lays 200 eggs each time .The actual survival rate is only one in a thousand . Those unfortunate eggs or young turtles are either eaten by crabs , lizard and snakes or stolen by poachers . The way from the sand beach to the sea is full of danger and hardship . The moment young turtles slides into the sea , we get free. In the sea turtles meet few natural enemies . We’ll pull head and feet into carapace at the danger. Yet the good days aren’t long.
Thousands of tourists flock to ocean .They enjoy themselves in the sea , but throw drink bottles into the sea , leave bags of waste instead of taking them away . Those sea pollution brings us disaster . Plenty of plastic bags are eaten by turtles as jellyfish by mistake because of weak eyesight . To cure the disease , human doctors have to open up the body , took off the plastic waste . Some serious ill died painfully even with help .
More than 30 percent of reptiles , birds and fish , turtles die off because of air pollution , water pollution, land pollution .
Now I am a marine guardian . We must improve the sense of protecting the environment . Please remember following two days: 23rd of May the World Turtle Day and 8th of June the World Ocean Day .
Our dear schoolmates,act now , no sea pollution , love blue ocean, save our seas .
That’s all. Thank you!
评语：This is an excellent composition. It’s very clever of you to use the first person to write this composition and tell people to protect our environment . There are a lot of long sentences in your composition. I love them very much.